ext_63654 ([identity profile] sunnyd-lite.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] tamingthemuse 2006-07-29 04:18 am (UTC)

If Jiminy Cricket were here, she'd step on him. Lovin' this line.

Like how you've caught Buffy's confusion and denial here. Show with such lines as: She just wasn't sure if she wanted to use her hand or her lips
her grin long gone in the face of what she refused to call panic.

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