ext_15304 ([identity profile] lit-gal.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] tamingthemuse 2007-02-03 08:13 pm (UTC)

Hey, you're better than most native English writers, but the first is more idiomatic English than anything else, and the verb tenses are hard for native writers to control!

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