Either she'd had a really good imagination, or her father had been right all along: it was a hovel. this doesn't really make sense, the sentence seems to be contradicting itself. The good imagination would confirm her father's belief rather than being an either/or.
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Either she'd had a really good imagination, or her father had been right all along: it was a hovel.
this doesn't really make sense, the sentence seems to be contradicting itself. The good imagination would confirm her father's belief rather than being an either/or.