The use of vague words in my writing is something I've been "told off" earlier too. I'm trying to pay attention to them but I do slip occasionally. Now that you commented on those few sentences I can well understand your point. Thanks for pointing that out. Have to be even more careful in the future.
I'm glad you liked this continuation to my previous stories.
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Date: 2006-08-06 09:48 am (UTC)I'm glad you liked this continuation to my previous stories.