Prompt 14--first come, first killed, The Challenge, Chapter Three, Scene Four

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Includes the prompt "First come, first killed" from tamingthemuse.

The Challenge, Chapter Three, Scene four.

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140 - First Come, First Killed - Attendez-Vous - wonderfinch - Original

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Title: Attendez-Vous
Fandom: N/A (Original)
Prompt: 140--First Come, First Killed
Warnings: None, I guess. If you dislike death, though, this might not be your bag of chips.
Rating: PG
Word Count: 2 408 (What a nice number. Haha.)
Summary: Sometimes, you have to make your own ghosts.

First-time poster here. I haven't written anything for about three months (and I've been lurking in here only slightly longer), and this week's prompt seemed so interesting that I managed to crank something out. Its quality is kind of dubious, though, and concrit would be immensely appreciated.

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