Well, you know me. I know practically nothing about this 'verse, but I like it when you write.

I think you captured her 'voice' beautifully, and I thoroughly enjoyed her ratiocination.

The comments about getting off on slaying make a lot of sense, and I'm sure any number of policemen and special forces soldiers feel very much the same way. That 'taint' changes them. A 'normal' relationship won't ever again quite suit