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2006-07-12 12:49 am (UTC)
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Oh, this was great. The visual, and the emotions... it was wonderful. It's really ... vivid and poetical. It's a very strong piece.
One thing, though;
'I am the ants he trods on as he walks across the grasses of his ancestral home.'
Should say treads, not trods.
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One thing, though;
'I am the ants he trods on as he walks across the grasses of his ancestral home.'
Should say treads, not trods.