You know it's years since I had a Jaffa Cake and now you made me hanker for one!
As ever, it's the details which make this chapter. You've put so much more texture onto Lucie that I begin to feel that I know her much better. The pressure of having to be strong is such a situation is crippling and at least she can be honest with herself, if not with anyone else.
I'm kind of shocked that Sylivie knows about Xavier's feelings. I'm now speculating as to whether Xavier suspects that she knows. God this is going to get complicated.
Loved the little details about the dress and the sandcastle brooch and the reminder of St Malo (we've got lost driving around the one way system in St Malo's Intra Muros)
My heart is in my mouth with Tim being sighted and I can't wait to see what happens next. Good job I'm a week behind, so can go straight to the next chapter!
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Date: 2007-06-03 05:31 pm (UTC)As ever, it's the details which make this chapter. You've put so much more texture onto Lucie that I begin to feel that I know her much better. The pressure of having to be strong is such a situation is crippling and at least she can be honest with herself, if not with anyone else.
I'm kind of shocked that Sylivie knows about Xavier's feelings. I'm now speculating as to whether Xavier suspects that she knows. God this is going to get complicated.
Loved the little details about the dress and the sandcastle brooch and the reminder of St Malo (we've got lost driving around the one way system in St Malo's Intra Muros)
My heart is in my mouth with Tim being sighted and I can't wait to see what happens next. Good job I'm a week behind, so can go straight to the next chapter!