That bit of insubordination could cause problems in the future, if KaLee doesn't make it clear who's in charge, but she's good at her job, so I'm hoping it will be alright. And there's tension between Spike and Cole too. I like the way you are gradually exposing the history of the characters and we discover that they interlink in the past, as well as being together in the present.
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And there's tension between Spike and Cole too. I like the way you are gradually exposing the history of the characters and we discover that they interlink in the past, as well as being together in the present.