heartaching and stunning and a beautiful connection between the human William was and the vampire Spike became. Oh, loverly loverly loverly!
You asked for concrit, and it's hard to give here because there is such a powerful connection between these two moments. I was a little confused about William's age in the first bit (10 year old child acting out or 18 year old boy rebelling?). But god, by the end I so didn't even care. *sob*
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heartaching and stunning and a beautiful connection between the human William was and the vampire Spike became. Oh, loverly loverly loverly!
You asked for concrit, and it's hard to give here because there is such a powerful connection between these two moments. I was a little confused about William's age in the first bit (10 year old child acting out or 18 year old boy rebelling?). But god, by the end I so didn't even care. *sob*