Learning the skills had kept him entertained while Drusilla was keeping Angelus entertained. Honing those skills on Angelus later had made him feel a bit better. LOL... Yep, this is Spike, and I love how the two sentences mirror each other in structure.
One shove would always lead to another and then to a proper fight. Letting Angel get him into a headlock meant the dark vampire had no idea what his hands were doing. Then it was child’s play to extract Angel’s wallet and hide it within the confines of his jacket. Oh yeah, totally, totally, totally in character.
This is just absolutely wonderful!!
I'm only seeing one grammar mistake, but you've made it in several places. If you have two complete sentences connected with "and" or "but", you need a comma before the "and/but"
Really being a vampire pick pocket was almost too easy[,] but he wasn’t going to argue about it.
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Date: 2006-07-15 12:24 am (UTC)One shove would always lead to another and then to a proper fight. Letting Angel get him into a headlock meant the dark vampire had no idea what his hands were doing. Then it was child’s play to extract Angel’s wallet and hide it within the confines of his jacket. Oh yeah, totally, totally, totally in character.
This is just absolutely wonderful!!
I'm only seeing one grammar mistake, but you've made it in several places. If you have two complete sentences connected with "and" or "but", you need a comma before the "and/but"
Really being a vampire pick pocket was almost too easy[,] but he wasn’t going to argue about it.