Date: 2006-10-22 11:14 am (UTC)
It's very nice when it comes to creating the atmosphere. The idea of Glass Witch is so original. I spotted few grammar mistakes like a pronoun in wrong place or switch of tense in the middle of the sentence. But all in all - gorgeous!
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