I think I didn't state what I meant very clearly. Sorry about that. You do have the action but this is a story of emotion, almost exclusively, and there's no break point of the emotional transition. From desperate to have her fix to the self loathing or disappointment or emotional let down or whatever she feels when it's over. It's that emotional transition I'm looking for.
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Date: 2006-07-20 01:19 pm (UTC)