Okay, I think I've got it fixed. Start from "He was her dirty little secret" and see if that flows any better. It puts her immediately afterwards, the sudden change of her hormones and need fading away to reason. Thank you again sweetie for staying with me on this one.
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Date: 2006-07-20 02:38 pm (UTC)~Nebula