ext_211639 ([identity profile] smwright.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] tamingthemuse 2006-11-05 01:16 am (UTC)

Very nice use of the prompt, and you've done a lovely job of capturing the equisite detail of the physiology of turning. Nicely done.

I especially liked, "He'd be her forward." Very poignant, made more so by her reception when she finally made it to W&H. Wonderfully sad.

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