ext_29998 ([identity profile] sparrow2000.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] tamingthemuse 2006-11-12 11:03 am (UTC)

I liked that a lot. I can just see Dawn trying to work out how much she was worth as a way of coming to terms with her own bizarre existance. And Spike being both furious and understanding was lovely.

One typo I think. You've go "I’m sacred, alright?” Did you mean "I'm scared"

Really nice moment between them.


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