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tamingthemuseTitle: Made the Children Laugh and Play
Author: Sunnyd_lite
Fandom: Firefly, post movie
Rating: G
Words: 828
Prompt: Crabapple
A/N: My thanks to![[livejournal.com profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/external/lj-userinfo.gif)
spiralleds for her betaing. Muse was rough with this one, so all errors are my own. The prompt was Crabapple and Mal decided he wanted to play. Last time I had him falling down a cliff. This job went a little easier on him.
The children laughed as, surrounded by lambs, Mal wandered through the orchard on the way back into town. The others had flown the mule, but someone needed to guide the lambs home. And he'd wanted to enjoy the opportunity to wear that dress and bonnet get up. Nothing like watching the goons' faces when they realized the little woman was actually totin' a very large gun.
'Course his gun was smaller than Zoe's, and Jayne's. And this trick only worked on worlds where religions divvied up the work according to gender rather than to them best suited to the tasks. But it was a hoot and a holler when they could pull it off. And the crew needed a bit of a laugh, 'specially now.
It also tickled him a bit that they were enforcing laws, rather than bendin' them. This moon's security detail had just been put to tender, and there was work needing to be done that couldn't wait on contracts. The town's folk were able and, more importantly, willing, to pay to bring the rustlers to justice.
And he wasn't against helping hard working regular types. He understood them. Reminded him of the ranch on Shadow where he'd grown up. 'Cept for them underestimating the women folk. He hadn't met anyone with a better head for business than his mother. Though some of Inara's comments had him thinking that she might be running a close second.
His ranch had an orchard too. Not as big as this, but it was a bit of nostalgia walking through one again, even if the flowers on the trees kept dropping on his hat. With a tilt of his head he realized he knew these trees. Huh. Imagine that, all those hours of punishment copying Mother's gardening catalogs and he'd actually learned something. Crabapples. Why anyone would want an orchard of the sour things he didn't know, nor care. If it was a mistake, it was theirs to make.
But something was twinging at his brain. Couldn't be that important. They'd done the job, helped out good people, the clients seemed willing to pay, and he was still wearing clothes. He raised his face to catch some sun; yup it was a good day.
As he left the orchard, a lamb butted against his thigh causing him to stumble, legs getting caught up in the unfamiliar material. Hadn't been this close to animals since the cattle job. This wasn't the life he'd imagined. Thought he'd be a rancher. Riding the wilds, roping in calves, and living life without any meddling. Had pictured himself with a passel of little ones; he'd always wanted brothers and sisters.
Who'd be standing by him? That had remained a mystery. Still, it would have been a good life. But wasn't one he was destined to have.
Mother had always said the right to make mistakes was the most cherished right of all. Alliance had seen fit to 'guide' folk away from mistakes, rather forcefully. So he'd seen little choice but to volunteer, defend the right of others to be stupid.
Some of the crew got that. Some didn't. Didn't matter. Their last job, getting to the heart of the Reavers, that had been a goodness on a large scale. This one, stopping the rustlers, was too, if affecting fewer people. Yet this one had come with pay and none of the crew harmed. Seemed odd that the smaller risk had the greater immediate reward.
After handing over the lambs and collecting their pay, Mal remembered what had been niggling at him, and asked for one more favor.
***
"If I knocked, would you let me in?"
"No. Last time I didn't put my foot down soon enough. I will not have you sneaking into my shuttle unannounced."
"Lucky for me I announced myself then, ain't it? It's springtime on the moon. Thought you might like these." He kept his eyes on the flowering branches, rather than look at Inara's reaction.
"Apple blossoms?"
"Crabapple, actually. But they mean renewal. Thought it fitting, you joining us again and all." He hazarded a glance up. Had he tipped his hand too much? It was always a tightrope, conversing with Inara. Might be why he'd yet to find time spent with her a tedium.
He didn't catch her retort. Didn't matter none. He'd see that shy smile, that re-evaluating gaze. He might not completely understand her, but as he collected the pieces, he was growing fond of the picture they made.
This wasn't the life he'd planned, but it was the life he had. They'd all been forcefully reminded that time was not an unlimited commodity. Serenity hadn't reached equilibrium yet; the changes, the losses were still too fresh. But what were mistakes for save to learn from? Remembering the lambs, and the laughing children, he had to smile. Renewal. This life might not be everything he'd wanted, but he'd live it to the fullest, mistakes and all.
A/N: Crabapple blossoms are a symbol of renewal! Google is fun!
Author: Sunnyd_lite
Fandom: Firefly, post movie
Rating: G
Words: 828
Prompt: Crabapple
A/N: My thanks to
spiralleds for her betaing. Muse was rough with this one, so all errors are my own. The prompt was Crabapple and Mal decided he wanted to play. Last time I had him falling down a cliff. This job went a little easier on him.The children laughed as, surrounded by lambs, Mal wandered through the orchard on the way back into town. The others had flown the mule, but someone needed to guide the lambs home. And he'd wanted to enjoy the opportunity to wear that dress and bonnet get up. Nothing like watching the goons' faces when they realized the little woman was actually totin' a very large gun.
'Course his gun was smaller than Zoe's, and Jayne's. And this trick only worked on worlds where religions divvied up the work according to gender rather than to them best suited to the tasks. But it was a hoot and a holler when they could pull it off. And the crew needed a bit of a laugh, 'specially now.
It also tickled him a bit that they were enforcing laws, rather than bendin' them. This moon's security detail had just been put to tender, and there was work needing to be done that couldn't wait on contracts. The town's folk were able and, more importantly, willing, to pay to bring the rustlers to justice.
And he wasn't against helping hard working regular types. He understood them. Reminded him of the ranch on Shadow where he'd grown up. 'Cept for them underestimating the women folk. He hadn't met anyone with a better head for business than his mother. Though some of Inara's comments had him thinking that she might be running a close second.
His ranch had an orchard too. Not as big as this, but it was a bit of nostalgia walking through one again, even if the flowers on the trees kept dropping on his hat. With a tilt of his head he realized he knew these trees. Huh. Imagine that, all those hours of punishment copying Mother's gardening catalogs and he'd actually learned something. Crabapples. Why anyone would want an orchard of the sour things he didn't know, nor care. If it was a mistake, it was theirs to make.
But something was twinging at his brain. Couldn't be that important. They'd done the job, helped out good people, the clients seemed willing to pay, and he was still wearing clothes. He raised his face to catch some sun; yup it was a good day.
As he left the orchard, a lamb butted against his thigh causing him to stumble, legs getting caught up in the unfamiliar material. Hadn't been this close to animals since the cattle job. This wasn't the life he'd imagined. Thought he'd be a rancher. Riding the wilds, roping in calves, and living life without any meddling. Had pictured himself with a passel of little ones; he'd always wanted brothers and sisters.
Who'd be standing by him? That had remained a mystery. Still, it would have been a good life. But wasn't one he was destined to have.
Mother had always said the right to make mistakes was the most cherished right of all. Alliance had seen fit to 'guide' folk away from mistakes, rather forcefully. So he'd seen little choice but to volunteer, defend the right of others to be stupid.
Some of the crew got that. Some didn't. Didn't matter. Their last job, getting to the heart of the Reavers, that had been a goodness on a large scale. This one, stopping the rustlers, was too, if affecting fewer people. Yet this one had come with pay and none of the crew harmed. Seemed odd that the smaller risk had the greater immediate reward.
After handing over the lambs and collecting their pay, Mal remembered what had been niggling at him, and asked for one more favor.
***
"If I knocked, would you let me in?"
"No. Last time I didn't put my foot down soon enough. I will not have you sneaking into my shuttle unannounced."
"Lucky for me I announced myself then, ain't it? It's springtime on the moon. Thought you might like these." He kept his eyes on the flowering branches, rather than look at Inara's reaction.
"Apple blossoms?"
"Crabapple, actually. But they mean renewal. Thought it fitting, you joining us again and all." He hazarded a glance up. Had he tipped his hand too much? It was always a tightrope, conversing with Inara. Might be why he'd yet to find time spent with her a tedium.
He didn't catch her retort. Didn't matter none. He'd see that shy smile, that re-evaluating gaze. He might not completely understand her, but as he collected the pieces, he was growing fond of the picture they made.
This wasn't the life he'd planned, but it was the life he had. They'd all been forcefully reminded that time was not an unlimited commodity. Serenity hadn't reached equilibrium yet; the changes, the losses were still too fresh. But what were mistakes for save to learn from? Remembering the lambs, and the laughing children, he had to smile. Renewal. This life might not be everything he'd wanted, but he'd live it to the fullest, mistakes and all.
A/N: Crabapple blossoms are a symbol of renewal! Google is fun!
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Date: 2007-01-05 03:37 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2007-01-05 04:44 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2007-01-05 03:58 am (UTC)~Nebula
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Date: 2007-01-05 04:46 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2007-01-05 04:40 am (UTC)One tiny little typo:
Had he tipped his had too much?
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Date: 2007-01-05 04:48 am (UTC)and the voice was perfect *double blush* Thanks for the generous comments!
and thanks for catching that typo...I've fixed it now but you'd think I'd have seen it the first six times I read the piece over *headdesk*
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Date: 2007-01-05 09:18 pm (UTC)maybe next time :)
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Date: 2007-01-07 02:46 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2007-01-07 12:04 am (UTC)This was a very sweet piece, and I agree with the above comment(s) that you've done an excellent job at capturing Mal's voice (ever a fav of mine).
A couple of lines that really stood out to me:
It also tickled him a bit that they were enforcing laws, rather than bendin' them. Really??? hee I suppose it might, but I'm surprised he admitted it (ok - it was only to himself *g*).
He might not completely understand her, but as he collected the pieces, he was growing fond of the picture they made. Beautiful turn of phrase. I may have to steal and corrupt it sometime. Just beautiful.
This wasn't the life he'd planned, but it was the life he had. This is true for so many people, but I think it takes a Mal-like acceptance of life to be able to begin to find contentment and understand purpose. You've captured that very well, too.
I really liked this! Nicely done.
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Date: 2007-01-07 02:52 am (UTC)Beautiful turn of phrase and steal worthy! *blush*
And your meta on my Mal *squee*
Thank you!!!
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Date: 2007-01-07 12:31 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2007-01-07 02:53 am (UTC)Thanks for reading and commenting!
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Date: 2007-01-13 04:43 pm (UTC)