Zippit - #44 Riposte - Foreplay - MBN Universe

[catw00man.livejournal.com]

This is a post for Zippit, I just helped with a little of the co-write. I've posted my own fic for this prompt so this one is for her.

Thanks!

~Cat


Foreplay

Summary: Sometimes words can be an art in themselves.

AUTHOR: Zippit & Catw00man
WEBSITE: http://www.cryptoffic.com/catw00man.html
RATING: R
CHARACTERS: Dale Earnhardt Jr/Kevin Harvick, Alternating POV
PROMPT: tamingthemuse #44 - Riposte
COMPANION PIECE TO: MBN Universe
COMPLETED: May 26, 2007...still in progress
WORDS: 2,929
DISCLAIMER: We own NOTHING. NOT REAL, NOT REAL, NOT REAL. ;-)
AUTHOR’S NOTE: This is still a work in progress, but here is what you could call the first "chapter." Also ~*~*~*~ denotes POV shift.
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Kansas Speedway, Post Busch Race: October 8th, 2005

Foreplay

Comments

[smwright.livejournal.com]

Your POV shifts are really good. I don't know the personalities you're writing (i.e., how you're writing them) yes, but you're drawing very clear distinctions between them.

I finally take notice that he’s decked out in the melt in your mouth Reese’s Peanut Butter Cup firesuit
This is a great metaphor!

[zippitgood.livejournal.com]

Thanks!

Glad that metaphor worked, I so wasn't feeling the writing muse yesterday.