Knight's Pride Chapter 9. Prompt 49 Aladdin

[fuzziekit.livejournal.com]

Another chapter and the official goal for Taming the Muse is 85 weeks. I like one of those Goddesses- Smiles. Okay, so that is the plan. That would be all the way to December 29 2008 Over a year and a half. I think I can do it… maybe if I keep working on things, but that is the reason why we do this right? To keep the muse writing. I just wish it would write in order and on one story.

Title: Knight’s Pride
Fandom: Voltron AU
Prompt: 49 Aladdin
Warnings: It is set in the future a combination of the cartoons and new comic book.
Rating: R for language and violence.
Summary: Peace has settled across the galaxy once more thanks to the bravery of Voltron and the team of young Space Explorers who piloted him. Now many years have passed and a new generation is facing a new threat and Voltron is needed once more. This is the story of eight recruits brought to train and fly the lions of Voltron Defender of the Universe.
Disclaimer: Original Characters are mine the universe and Voltron Characters are not… not making a profit don’t sue.
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Comments

[thismaz.livejournal.com]

So neither do I. I forget that you humans have a tendency to remember the past differently."
I like that, although I have to admit, that is partly because it echoes a thought in my own story *g*
But I like it for itself, too. It provides just enough information to spike the imagination.
And this intrigues me - KaLee studied him. Not for public ears.
I am getting very suspicious of KaLee's origins. You write her, clearly, as a commanding officer, and it could be just that.... but somehow, I think there is more going on here than the truth, the whole truth and nothing but the truth, for all that that is what they are supposedly doing.
The first person to successfully navigate that corridor was Felix Brinks, in a little star sailor
I love that image too - makes me think of single-handed yachtsmen.
Droe's story is interesting, but the tease at the end has me wishing for more. Will Derk fill in some of the gaps Droe left too?
Good chapter.

[fuzziekit.livejournal.com]

thanks.