ext_85304 ([identity profile] fuzziekit.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] tamingthemuse2007-07-20 05:28 pm

Knight's Pride Chapter 13, Prompt 53

Well I made it work… who knew. Not easy I will tell you that. Posting early and finishing up next chapter today. Harry Potter... I am so reading it in two days... maybe.

Title: Knight’s Pride
Fandom: Voltron AU
Prompt: 53 Ayers Rock
Warnings: It is set in the future a combination of the cartoons and new comic book.
Rating: R for language and violence.
Summary: Peace has settled across the galaxy once more thanks to the bravery of Voltron and the team of young Space Explorers who piloted him. Now many years have passed and a new generation is facing a new threat and Voltron is needed once more. This is the story of eight recruits brought to train and fly the lions of Voltron Defender of the Universe.
Disclaimer: Original Characters are mine the universe and Voltron Characters are not… not making a profit don’t sue.

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[identity profile] thismaz.livejournal.com 2007-07-29 10:44 am (UTC)(link)
That bit of insubordination could cause problems in the future, if KaLee doesn't make it clear who's in charge, but she's good at her job, so I'm hoping it will be alright.
And there's tension between Spike and Cole too. I like the way you are gradually exposing the history of the characters and we discover that they interlink in the past, as well as being together in the present.