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[lit-gal.livejournal.com]

I'm not sure about this. I used the microphone since my hand hurts, and that makes it a little harder to write. I like Dan's warped sense of humor, and you'll have to tell me if the murder keeps your interest

Title:  Untitled??
Fandom: Supposedly original, but if you can't catch what fandom this is AU from, you really need glasses
Prompt: Early Bird Catches Pneumonia
Warnings: Crime scene. Possible pre-slash if you squint.
Rating: R - Violence
Summary: Sent to take custody of a prisoner who fled the city, one detective wonders if they've caught the right guy.

My original work is evenually removed from open communities.  Sorry

Comments

[raissad.livejournal.com]

Considering Simmons had enough shoulders for two Roman armies and a Greek god, the man had to be crammed into the tiny room, but Dan didn't feel a whole lot of sympathy.

My favorite line! Well done. I related to Dan re: the paperwork. I always try to get someone else to do mine, if I can.

[lit-gal.livejournal.com]

I'm glad you liked it. I do like Dan as a character. Sarcastic, with just a little bitterness, and lots of intelligence.