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Title: The Cleansing, Part 3
Fandom: Original
Prompt: Bemused
Warnings: M/M relationships
Rating: PG-13, for the F-bomb
Summary: He's just trying to help.
Author's request: Is it too confusing the main character still doesn't have a name?  Also, did I get my tenses right?  I think I may have changed half-way through...



 

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Title:  The Cleansing (part 2)
Author:  [livejournal.com profile] fizzerbass 
Fandom:  Original
Prompt:  #137: Filched
Warnings:  None
Rating: G
Summary:  He remembers their time together as summer.
Notes: Trying to flesh out the story I started with the Bleach prompt.  I had trouble creating the same mood as the first part so, if you read that one and wouldn't mind reading this one, can you please give me some suggestions as to how to "toughen" this part up?  Thanks!


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Title: The Cleansing
Prompt: #137 - Bleach
Fandom: None
Warnings: ?  Pointless meanderings, maybe.
Rating: G
Summary:  He wants it all to end.
Notes:  So, this is a first for me.  Not relying on a fandom to fuel a story, that is.  Can I ask you a question/favor?  Does the ambiguous-ness of this work, or does it need *details*?   Concrit is most sincerely welcomed.  :)



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Title:  Looking at the Future
Fandom:  Shelter
Prompt:  Rejection
Warnings:  Adult situations, m/m implied sex
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 525
Summary:  Shaun can wait.
Disclaimer:  Shelter, along with the characters of Shaun and Zach, belong to Jonah Markowitz. 
Author's Notes:  First time poster and I'm going to slap this up here before I lose the nerve.  I'd love some constructive criticism, because the whole point of this is to get better, right?


It wasn't a pushing away. )

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